Wednesday, 17 June 2020






2 comments:

  1. kia ora my name is Charlotte
    and i'm from saint mary's school I like your writing about sharks and how you said it could do doughnuts.
    they are fun I think your writing is white and blue they look really nice together.your learning reminds me of going down to queenstown. your worked helped me think. what else can you tell me about learning have you tried making your font writing different
    ma te wa Charlotte

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  2. Kio ora im Yumi from St marys school
    I really like how you did your story about shark ride its really interesting
    It reminds me of queenstown when i went there!
    Have you tried more writing?

    From Yumi.

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