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kia ora my name is Charlotte and i'm from saint mary's school I like your writing about sharks and how you said it could do doughnuts. they are fun I think your writing is white and blue they look really nice together.your learning reminds me of going down to queenstown. your worked helped me think. what else can you tell me about learning have you tried making your font writing different ma te wa Charlotte
Kio ora im Yumi from St marys school I really like how you did your story about shark ride its really interesting It reminds me of queenstown when i went there! Have you tried more writing?
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kia ora my name is Charlotte
ReplyDeleteand i'm from saint mary's school I like your writing about sharks and how you said it could do doughnuts.
they are fun I think your writing is white and blue they look really nice together.your learning reminds me of going down to queenstown. your worked helped me think. what else can you tell me about learning have you tried making your font writing different
ma te wa Charlotte
Kio ora im Yumi from St marys school
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did your story about shark ride its really interesting
It reminds me of queenstown when i went there!
Have you tried more writing?
From Yumi.